“Blog Assignment #1 – Townsend”
- Camilla Townsend addresses several historical questions in her article. She questions whether or not the natives thought of the Spanish as gods, how the Spanish conquered the New World, and how the Spanish had such a plausible conquest. While, the Spanish’s rule was expected and inevitable, the natives were very interested in learning about the Spanish and wanted to know as much as possible about them.
- Townsend references several myths and stories to answer these questions. These stories have been passed down over generations and are claimed to be from the time of Moctezuma, the leader of the Aztecs, and Cortes, the Spanish leader. Townsend uses these sources and presents both sides.
- Townsend’s main point throughout her article is that the Spanish conquest was unavoidable. No matter how the natives tried to fight off the Spanish it was impossible. It would have been smart for the natives to ally with the Spanish; they were strong and technologically advanced. However, they were armed and only interested in conquering and acquiring new land. Ultimately, Townsend makes the point that the natives were unprepared for the Spanish lack of respect, cruelty, and inevitable take-over of their lands.
- I believe that Townsend proved her argument. Throughout her article she makes the statement that the take over was unfair. The Spanish were conniving and cruel towards the natives and the Aztecs. Cortes even wrote of his cruelty saying, “I burnt more than ten villages, in one of which there were more than three thousand houses, where the inhabitants fought with us, although there was no one [no warriors] there to help them. They would rather be Your Highness’s vassals than see their houses destroyed and their women and children killed” (Townsend, 41). The Spanish also had a significant advantage over the natives technologically. “The Spanish had a technological advantage large enough to ensure their victory, especially if we acknowledge that their technology included not only blunderbusses and powder but also printing presses, steel blades and armor, crossbows, horses and riding equipment, ships, navigation tools—and indirectly, as a result of the latter three, an array of diseases” (Townsend, 5).
- The answers to the questions that Townsend presents are important to our study of United States history because they give us inside knowledge to the relationship of the Europeans and the natives of the New World in the past. Understanding those relationships makes me better understand how the relationships developed and how they lead to the relationships between the different groups of people in the future or even now.
“Blog Assignment #2 – Breen”
1. In his article, T. H. Breen recreates the framework that informed one of the fundamental narratives of the mid-eighteenth century in order to better understand how the Americans came to visualize themselves as independent with regards to trade. He examines the importance of trade in American culture. In this particular article, Breen “reconstituted a frame of reference that defined itself around participation in a newly established consumer marketplace” (Breen, 501). He argues that things like commercial capitalism imposed on the lives of Americans. Trade affected the politics and culture of early America. Breen believes that the Revolution was genuinely revolutionary due to the unintentional results of the commercial ideas of the Americans.
2. Breen’s main points touch on the many arguments had between the Americans and the British. His main point is that trade affected the relationship between the two countries and ultimately affected the politics and culture of the American people. The British believed themselves to be more powerful than the Americans. Therefore, when the Americans, in order to show off whatever wealth they had, started dressing in finer clothing, using expensive furnishings, and holding lavish events, the British became angry. This caused them to impose different Acts on the Americans, which involved severe taxes for British goods. The Americans also became angry and began boycotting British goods entirely. Breen concludes that the creation of political instruments available to all ranks, the improvement of a virtue concept including all those capable of economic self-restraint, and the development of interpretive communities based on shared and secular interests were the results of the mental process of consuming Americans.
3. Breen provides several sources as evidence of his claim. He uses several newspaper, journals, articles, sermons, letters and pamphlets as primary sources claiming that he had “examined all the major colonial newspapers of this period as well as the familiar pamphlet and sermonic literature” (Breen, 479). Breen mainly used newspapers such as the Boston Gazette, the Boston Evening Post, the South Carolina Gazette, and the Pennsylvania Chronicle as his primary sources.
4. This article challenges the presentation of the American’s war for independence from Britain given by Out of Many, which states, “The glue that held the Americans together during this long struggle was the sense of national community that emerged in places like Valley Forge during the winter of 1777” (Out of Many, 166). In other words, the textbook presents the idea the Seven Years’ War brought the colonies together and unified them against the British. However, Breen’s article supports the idea that the colonies’ unity was strengthened by the boycotts against Great Britain due to the fact that all the colonies participated.
5. Breen’s article was well written and very persuasive. He presented several sources with factual evidence from the time period. He really illustrated the idea that the Americans’ desire to show off for their British visitors with lavish clothing and houses was detrimental for them. Breen presents that the “The Boston Evening-Post noted that the British belief in ‘our being in affluent and flourishing circumstances, was grounded upon a mistake or the misrepresentation” (Breen, 475). He also argued that the boycotts were the main reason for the colonies unity. He presented convincing evidence that was different from the textbook. This did make me consider both positions carefully, but ultimately change my mind from my original theory about the revolutionary era.
“Blog Assignment #3 – Campbell”
1. In Jacqueline G. Campbell’s “The Most Diabolical Act of the Barbarous War’: Soldiers, Civilians, and the Burning of Columbia, February 1865”, she examines the role of elite southern women during the Civil War, especially in Columbia, South Carolina. Campbell states that throughout the war, the women in the South were proud and loyal to the Confederate nation, which surprised many, especially the Northerners. The women’s loyalty, pride, and honor to their nation, Campbell argues, guided the path for woman to earn strong and influential roles in their communities.
2. Throughout her article, Campbell highlights the loyalty and pride that Southern women had for their nation during the Civil War. The southern women “recognized the broader goals of war, they saw themselves as political actors, and they shared the cultural mores of the men of their own race and class” (Campbell, 66). Campbell also touches on the Yankee soldier’s views of these strong women who demanded respect and were very opinionated. The Northern soldiers believed the women’s’ pride to be very helpful for the Confederates. She noted that northern men often complained that the southern women rejected the North’s superiority. They were surprised that the women would fight “as mothers and warriors” to maintain their dignity and pride (Campbell, 59). She concludes her article claiming that the southern women “certainly had reason enough to hate Yankee soldiers who wrought such devastation on their homes and country” as well as their lack of chivalry compared to their southern gentlemen like Robert E. Lee (Campbell, 66). That mixed with their strong sense of pride and loyalty led Confederate men to recognize their female kin’s power and authority, even after the war. Ultimately, she claims that the “Civil War glorified the role of the white soldier, occluded the roles of blacks, and rendered white southern women victims of northern atrocities and potential victims of black rapists” (Campbell, 68).
3. Campbell refers to several other Civil War historians in her article. She draws on historians like Mark Grimsley, James McPherson, Drew Gilpin Faust, William Blair, and Gary Gallagher. Campbell strengthens her argument by disagreeing with Faust’s claim that the war “burdened [the women] emotionally and materially in ways they were not prepared to handle” (Campbell, 54). She uses McPherson’s argument to strengthen her argument as well.
4. Campbell’s article examines developing authority for women as a result of the Civil War. She emphasizes how southern women fought like “mothers and warriors” to support their Confederate nation. However, in the textbook, Out of Many claim that there were many differences between the elite southern women and the middle/lower class southern women. The non-elite women were very angry because the elite women had many pleasures that weren’t available to the middle/lower class women during the war. Also, the lower class women did not appreciate the upper class women’s pride and loyalty of the Confederacy because they did not suffer the same grievances that the lower classes did.
5. Campbell incorporates the notions of “true womanhood” and “female honor” by making the claim that southern women were willing to do anything to protect their families. They knew and developed their importance in their communities. The women found many reasons to hate the Yankee soldiers due to the havoc they caused on the Confederacy, especially the burning of Columbia, SC. She illustrated how the southern woman utilized their morals to try to stop the Yankee soldiers. The women would use their manners and southern charm to demand respect. She uses women like Grace Elmore and Emma LeConte, who disapprove of and spoke out against Northern men to show her support for the Confederacy. Campbell disagrees with Drew Gilpin Faust’s argument that elite white women’s disillusionment with and growing resistance to the war, especially after Sherman’s march, played a significant role in the Confederacy’s defeat. She claims women played a major role in the unification of the Confederate army. Sherman’s march did not constitute “total war” as it is understood today. The war was extremely destructive, however, women and children were not usually harmed.
Comment 1- Andie M
This assignment clearly points out the argument about how the Spanish conquest was unpreventable, and she goes onto you state that the Spanish also had a significant advantage over the natives technologically. “The Spanish had a technological advantage large enough to ensure their victory, especially if we acknowledge that their technology included not only blunderbusses and powder but also printing presses, steel blades and armor, crossbows, horses and riding equipment, ships, navigation tools—and indirectly, as a result of the latter three, an array of diseases” (Townsend, 5).” She also mentions how there are several sources that Townsend uses including mainly legends, but also Cortes’ letters. The Mexicans became aware of this gap and tried to defeat it but were as mentioned before, at a great disadvantage. The Mexicans truly tried to respond to the reality of the situation, making it a diffucult defeat for the Spanish. This article introduced me with the idea that the Spanish defeat although inevitable, was not easy. The natives put up a fight to preserve their culture and keep their land, however because of the technological gap, it was an unfair battle. She makes a strong concluding point about how former historical events can affect our relationships with groups of people even today, which is something I never thought about.
Comment 2—Lydia
I chose Faust’s assignment because I think it explained the article by Townsend well. Her specific examples helped me to understand Townsend’s basic argument. She clarifies the argument in question #1 when she gives the particular questions that Townsend addresses. For example, Faust explained that Townsend “questions whether or not the natives thought of the Spanish as gods, how the Spanish conquered the New World”. These are only a few of the specific subjects Faust touches on. In question #3 Faust further helps me understand Townsend’s argument when she explains Townsend’s main point of her article. This is a point in the article that I think Faust did an excellent job of interpreting Townsend’s main point. She states the main point, and then she continues her analysis by explaining why the Spanish conquest was unavoidable. Faust used direct quotes from Townsend in order to support her belief that Townsend did prove her argument. Without reading this article, I believe I have a good grasp of what it is about because Faust did a great job analyzing it!
Comment 2
Robert: This is a very well constructed article because it opens up with questions and statements like “weather or not the natives thought of the Spanish as gods”, and “how the Spanish conquered the New World” (Faust). This makes it clear exactly what will be discussed in the author’s next entries. Next, Faust describes that Townsend used sources like stories passed down through generations to explain her statements. This is important because it allows the reader to realize that the stories may not be 100% accurate. Next, I like how Faust used the phrase “Townsend’s main point throughout her article…” because it makes it extremely easy to know what Townsends article mostly focused on. Also, Faust used interesting quotes from Townsend’s article like “I burnt more than 10 villages in which there were more than 3000 houses…” which allows readers to sketch a picture in their minds allowing them to see exactly what occurred in the conquest. Finally Faust concludes the entry with some personal insight about the importance of the conquest; which is helpful because now I understand the gist of what Townsend says in the article.
Comment #2
I decided to do Fausts article becuase even though I did not read the Townsend article, I felt as if I was able to understand what the article was about. She stated what the article discussed plainly in her first answer. There were no filler sentences involved, rather she stated her points in a clear and concise matter. Faust also uses quotes from the text very well to her advantage. The quote concerning Cortez and his cruelty towards Indians is an example of a quote that allows Faust to strengthen her argument. She uses these quotes in order to make it apparent to the reader that she read the article fully. After reading her blog I felt as if I had a very clear picture of what Townsend’s article discussed without actually having read the article.
Comment #2
I choose to comment on Faust’s blog because although I did not read this article, I feel like I understand the main points based on the thoroughness of Faust’s responses. Faust clearly states that the main point of this argument was “that the Spanish conquest was unavoidable”. She uses many quotes and examples to explain how this conquest occured, which gave me a good background on the article. I learned that the natives were interested in the Spanish, but the Spanish wanted nothing to do with them which meant that “the natives were unprepared for the Spanish lack of respect, cruelty, and inevitable take-over of their lands”. Faust states the many advantages that the Spanish had over the natives, and this really backs up her argument. I think Faust did a great job in summarizing the article and provided a sufficient amount of evidence.
-Andie S
Winter Comment # 2
I chose Faust’s assignment because she clearly understood the article very well and she did a great job at presenting how well she understood it. It was very easy for me to comprehend the article without even reading it because of Faust’s answers. In the third question Faust introduces the main point, which she says is that the “Spanish conquest was unavoidable.” A simple but clear answer that helps the reader really grasp the main point. She goes on to prove her point further by providing examples from the article. She uses direct quotes to illustrate the cruelty of the Spanish towards the natives and the technological advantage they had. That was a great way to help me further see why her main point of her argument is logical. Faust concludes with a great point of how the relationship between the Spanish and the natives have helped pave way to relationships with foreigners today.
Comment #2
The information presented in these five answers was enough for me, although I did not read this article, to get a clear indication of what Townsend’s argument was about. The responses stress the advantages the Spanish had over the natives in all facets of war but also the fact that they were brutal and cruel. The quote from Cortes in response 4 is cold-blooded and gives me an understanding of how the article portrayed the Spanish. After reading these responses it is clear to me that with such men wielding such power against a people that were seemingly defenseless and completely unprepared for what the Spanish were intending, the take-over was inevitable and that, as Faust states, was the main point of the article.
Comment #4
This is a great description of the different effect that American trade and culture had on the British visitors. Having not read this article it is clear that the Americans were interpreted by the British in regards to their lavishness as a sign of their affluence and self-reliance. And because of these beliefs the British heavily taxed those things associated with the well to do. The Acts that the British imposed on the Americans were meant to keep them down but instead they gave all the Americans a common uniting factor that made them strong. It is evident when she writes, “Breen’s article supports the idea that the colonies’ unity was strengthened by the boycotts against Great Britain due to the fact that all the colonies participated.” Overall Faust shows solid and complete responses to the five prompts.
~Greg
Comment # 3: Bryce R.
Faust provided an accurate analysis on Breen’s article. She was able to describe the causes and effects of American independence as well as the interpretations that both America and Britain concluded from actions taken during the time period. Faust was able to support her analysis with several quotes from Breen’s article. These quotes included the newly established consumer marketplace, Breen’s examination of historical literature, and the Boston Evening’s quote about affluence. I especially liked her thoughts about the quote from Out of Many dealing with the “glue that held Americans together.” Faust explains that there were two separate causes creating the “glue,” one was the Seven Years War, and the other was the boycotts against Great Britain. This assignment helped me find a few things that I originally missed in my own readings of the article. By reviewing a classmate’s work, I was able to read their thoughts on the article in addition to mine. Thus, I was able to understand Breen’s view on the article better as well as the assumptions and opinions that could be gained from it.
Comment # 3- Logan May
I think that Faust provided extremely good supporting evidence behind her arguments, and the structure of her answers allowed me as a reader to easily understand the questions she was answering. She went into detail about the causes of American independence along with strong evidence showing the American/British opinions of these events. Breen’s articles relied on evidence from text such as newspaper articles as well as journals and Faust was able to translate these quotes into her answers, which is sometimes difficult to do. One example of this is in the last answer of her blog, stating that the English has a false interpretation of how the Americans lived. “The Boston Evening-Post noted that the British belief in ‘our being in affluent and flourishing circumstances, was grounded upon a mistake or the misrepresentation” (Breen, 475). This quote was important to support the argument posed by Faust. By looking at others students opinions and answers to the same reading I had, it gives me different ways of looking at the questions posed to us. We can combine our knowledge along with the rest of the class in discussing the history of our past.
Faust in her Blog was able to fully address the question and with use of direct reference to the text and well thought out answers. She made it easy for me the reader. She presented a full answer to the question by clearly stating what Breen references in his article. She quotes Breen in regards to the commercial market place and its significant role in leading up to the American Revolution. Faust states: “Breen believes that the Revolution was genuinely revolutionary due to the unintentional results of the commercial ideas of the Americans.” This is an example of her thorough knowledge of the article and what Breen is attempting to say. Her blog helped me in my understanding the article in adequatltly summarizing the main points of the article while providing insight into the commercial culture surrounding the political period.
Comment 3 – Cam Smith (Above)
Comment #4- Max
Even though I did not read T.H. Breen’s article, I feel that I learned the main points through Faust’s article. She does a very good job of explaining the main points and supporting it with strong examples. Even though I have been studying this material regarding the taxes and acts, Faust even bettered my understanding of the subject by discussing the importance of trade. It was very interesting to me to find out that the Americans started dressing better and hosting more lavish events for the sole purpose of showing off the British that they were wealthy as well. It is comical to me that this made the British angry and it was a small scare competition that began between the British and the Americans.
Comment #5
Faust gives a detailed and thorough analysis of Campbell’s article. Faust is able to explain to the audience the accounts and details of the events that occurred during the burning of Columbia in 1865. Since I read this article as well I was curious to see what different statements Faust correlated in her readings. For example, in her first answer relating to the thesis of Campbell’s article, Faust comes up with a few main reasons why women of the South had a large part in the war. She said “the women’s loyalty, pride, and honor to their nation, Campbell argues, guided the path for women to earn strong and influential roles in their community.” I think this statement is very important because it give a reader who may have not read Campbell’s article, a sense of what the rest of her comments would entail. Faust used a great deal of quotes in her answers and used enough detail to give me a full understanding of what she was trying to accomplish. I really enjoyed looking over her blog because I feel like she put her full effort into examining Campbell’s article and it was evident throughout.
Comment 5
Faust clarifies Campbell’s argument by clearly stating the importance of the southern women during the Civil War. Faust also describes the importance of the women’s social position that as a result guided the women to earn influential roles in society that still stands today. Faust supports her interpretation of Campbell’s arguments by stating “the southern women “recognized the broader goals of war, they saw themselves as political actors, and they shared the cultural mores of the men of their own race and class” (Campbell, 66).” This direct quote examines one of Campbell’s main points. The women were not just taking care of the household, they saw themselves as part of the war effort. The women illustrated that they could hold power and responsibilities while their men were at war. An aspect that I did not consider is the topic of total war after Sherman’s March as not being “total war”. In my assignment I did put that Sherman’s March was characterized as “total war” because he destroyed the whole town unnecessarily. Sherman went in and burnt the city killed the livestock and left the people in totally destitute. However, Faust believes that the Sherman March was not a “total war”. She supports this argument by stating “Sherman’s March, played a significant role in the Confederacy’s defeat…Sherman’s march did not constitute “total war” as it is understood today. The war was extremely destructive, however, women and children were not usually harmed.” I did not consider the women and children as the reasons that would constitute a war as “total war” or not. I looked at “total war” as the destruction of a whole town and the death of a large part of a population.
Janice
Comment # 5 – Felicia
The assignment identifies the main idea of the article to be “the women would fight ‘as mothers and warriors’ to maintain their dignity and pride.” To further explain this claim, they discuss the loyalty and pride the elite southern women felt for their nation. The opinions of union soldiers were also used to explain the important role southern women played during the civil war. The women used the belief that they were morally superior to their advantage when trying to stand up to the union soldiers. The article is even further simplified with the statement, “southern women were willing to do anything to protect their families.” This statement clearly describes the mindset of many southern women during the civil war.
Faust provided thorough analyzation and description of the article. Even after reading the article myself, I gained a better understanding from her blog. I think she really grasps Campbell’s main argument when she states, “Throughout her article, Campbell highlights the loyalty and pride that Southern women had for their nation during the Civil War. ” This clear and to the point sentence adequately revels Campbell’s main argument. Faust’s answers prove that she not only read the article, but also had a deep understanding of it as she expanded my understanding of it as well.
OOPS I PRESSED SUBMIT EFORE I WAS FINISHED!
Specific details from the article were utilize din her answers such as, She uses women like Grace Elmore and Emma LeConte, who disapprove of and spoke out against Northern men to show her support for the Confederacy.” This was new information to me, because I did not recall those examples from Campbell’s piece. While Faust was able to describe the overall message of Campbell’s article, she also utilized specific details in order to support her claims. Her answers were very obviously well researched and also well thought out for they were easy to follow and understand.
Comment # 6 – Bryce R.
Faust gives a good, detailed, response to the article. She clearly states the main subject of Campbell’s article within the first few sentences. “she examines the role of elite southern women during the Civil War, especially in Columbia, South Carolina” (Faust). After reading her text, I was able to clearly understand the article by Campbell and the main points that were expressed. Faust did a particularly good job in analyzing the different groups that were affected by the South Carolina women, and how they were affected. The Confederacy was affected and gained a greater sense of unity. The Northern soldiers were affected when they complained about the roles of the women and how the North wasn’t as “chivalrous.” These South Carolina elites even affected the lower class women in the Confederacy. The lower class women complained about the greater pleasures that the elites received, as well as, the lack of hardships that the elites had to endure during those times. Faust’s work shows great insight and effort in her work. By analyzing her work, I was able to understand the article through explanations that were not my own. Reading another student’s responses is beneficial because one can experience greater knowledge by taking sides with someone else’s point of view.
Comment #5
In reading over the Blog Faust it is clear to see that she presents a clear and correct response to the question. She is clear and concise in her writing, and through her extensive use of direct quotation she allows the reader to understand that she is able to back up her research. In describing the attack on Colombia, South Carolina in relation to Confederate women, Faust states that “the women’s loyalty, pride, and honor to their nation guided the path for woman to earn strong and influential roles in their communities.” This is Faust’s thesis statement of what the author Campbell in trying to portray in her writing. This quote exemplifies Faust’s ability to extract important information from the article and make it clear to the reader. She uses direct quoting from the article in order to future advance her arguments. “Southern women recognized the broader goals of war, they saw themselves as political actors, and they shared the cultural mores of the men of their own race and class” (Campbell, 66) She does an excellent job of setting up and explaining all of her quotes. This quote in particular relates to the way on which Southern women saw how they were able to contribute to the war effort. I though that Faust did an excellent job in paper, and she brought my attention to some direct sources in the reading that related strongly to the overall thesis. In describing “total war” she says how it did not constitute a total war due to the Northern men not slaughtering the women and children. This is something I did not know previously. Overall it was a great blog entry and whether you read the article or not was able to convey the most crucial elements of Campbell’s article.
-Cam